Estou com dificuldade em escrever uma cena chocante e violenta.

Criei o primeiro capítulo um dá minha primeira história, gostaria de ouvir a opinião de alguém.

Capítulo 1 da minha história

Criei o capítulo um dá minha primeira história e gostaria de saber a opinião de alguém se possível, para que possa me ajudar a melhorar no meu texto

Ramia: Chimeran War (chapter rewritten And contains grammar and spelling errors))

O capítulo 2 dá minha história.

Do you think this fight will happen somewhere down the road?

What are the main religions that the species presented so far worship?, and also the main gods/goddesses of this universe?

Qual nome voces dariam pras minhas personagens?

To use a weapon like this to confront the mandragloria, the military power is at least equivalent to a nuclear bomb. Now here's the question, did a reincarnated being influence the design of this weapon?

Had to draw her today

And if Ramia existed in the Hunter x Hunter universe, would she be able to go to the Dark Continent without any problems?

Eu não tenho ideia de como eu posso fazer os designs da minha história

Tem algum problema em focar demais no protagonista?

Malhory supremacy wip

Is it likely that there are reincarnated people from different eras!?

I created the first chapter of my story.

Is there slavery in the universe of Ramia? Do Demons often enslave other races? Is it an illegal trade with the black market or legalized?

How would y'all rate Dutch's plans?

Ramia: War of the Chimeras (An au created by me)

I colored the recent Ramia drawing

What is Cole's fighting style? What are his strategies?

I created a fan-made character, he's from the Ramia universe. I designed him and even did his lore.

I drew Cornelia, and I'll tell you one thing: drawing a wizard's hat is complicated.

I drew the sharmeela.