Anyone else noticed Sky World continuity errors? (Spoilers)

I've noticed some continuity plot errors in Sky World. I'm a huge fan but it's fairly irritating.

1) at the end of City World, McGill is revived by Alexander Turov in his mansion in Belarus. Galina knows this and says she got McGill revived. In Sky World Galina is angry on learning McGill was there and thinks the reason was cheating with her sister Sophia and he has to explain that he was revived like she didn't already know.

2) McGill is tortured and sentenced to 10 years death by execution, largely due to a jealous Galina. Upon revival they speak on a couple of different occasions. Later on, they have a meeting and "this is the first time we've met since the torture" and have a reunion and apologize.

Think Larson needs someone to read his books that pays attention to the story and not just proofreading. Maybe he writes so quickly he loses track of events.