I just finished my first ever Sonic rewrite and would love some feedback

I had just recently finished the first of four stories required for my Sonic 06 rewrite and would love if you could give it a read. I am open to all forms of criticism and even created a new prolouge that gives some new context to events that were never explained in the original story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/13WEneEPQ-ZFOJIkN-AJHeADWSkRlb0Gr/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=112669388611452894097&rtpof=true&sd=true