Self Learning Adult Requires Critique

Hi there, I am a self-learning adult at present. I bought a Roland Fp10 a few months back. Was mostly learning through FlowKey, until I realised I wasn't enjoying it, and didn't know how to progress. I could get the notes right on pieces but nothing ever sounded right, and I didn't have a method of learning, was mostly just looking at the video and copying.

Had a crack at learning sheet musics basics and have started from square one. I don't have a teacher, and possibly won't have one until a few months. Would love any critique or tips on my playing so I can improve until then.

This is me playing Melody in G No. 39 from ABRSM initial grade 2025/26 pieces.

TLDR; starting from scratch after a few months using flowkey, need critique, no access to teacher.