Is this a good start?

So this is still in the making. can you tell me if you think it’s a good start? What should I improve? I know there is a perspective problem on the left with the windows and I’m gonna redo it.

So this is still in the making. can you tell me if you think it’s a good start? What should I improve? I know there is a perspective problem on the left with the windows and I’m gonna redo it.