Atonement of the Spine Cleaver? Thoughts?

I started the book last night and I started to fall in love with the characters. However, I’m about halfway through Chapter 6 and I am noticing all sorts of grammatical errors. (Spoilers ahead?)

For example: in the list of the different houses of the Realms, ice is there twice:

“The Realms was a country made up of twelve different houses. Each house was tied to one of the twelve main elemental strains of magick: air, fire, water, light, dark, ice, foliage, fauna, alloy, death, life, and ice.”

In another section, the word “taught” is used instead of “taunt”:

”Rorax’s head throbbed, and this time the magick of her knife grew taught, straining her mind like it was tightening against an outside force.”

I have to look for these things at my job, not for fiction books but regulated manuals, and it’s killing me. I’m starting to become less invested. A lot of this is like… really basic stuff to catch?

Am I being too critical here? I don’t want to commit to a DNF yet cause I’d like to see where the plot goes. But I’m only 8% in and the errors are just picking up even more. What do you guys think? Should I keep going?

(Just to add, I’m copying these quotes directly from the kindle reader app on my phone. I’m also on mobile so I’m sorry for any grammatical/formatting errors of my own. I also tried to mark the quotes as spoiler, I hope it works!)

(Edit to try and fix spoilers)