I started writing a series on the evolution of ideas in physics. I would appreciate some feedback from this esteemed group of people of culture. Is this thing readable?

Series here. Totally free.

Some background:

I found myself talking to people and realized that very few know (even some trained physicists) where our current understanding of the Universe comes from.

This aspect of education is often neglected in academia and in popular communication. It's like "Look, the Universe is expanding and even accelerating - be amazed" or "This is quantum mechanics. Yes it's weird. Now shut up and calculate".

I don't believe that even a lay understanding of quantum mechanics or general relativity can be achieved without knowing how these intuitions and ideas where built over time. Therefore, I'm writing my guts out.