Painting advice/critique

Hey people. I recently picked up painting Warhammer, which is a hobby I used to do, poorly, when I was about 10yo.

I have really been enjoying the whole process of creating these and I find it pretty therapeutic with some headphones to keep me company.

I'm no where near finished with a presentable model yet but I thought I would reach out for some constructive criticism, advice and an honest views from more experienced people of where I am at and what I might want to try next.

For this Dark Angel I have just completed a recess shade, and began my first edge highlights which I intend to tidy up and make a bit tighter as I feel like my lines were a bit thick on the leg panels especially. Its not a great first attempt but I think with practice I can improve.

So yeah, thanks for those who want to be honest and offer some input 👍🏼